Haiku – Tears and Pain

Under lock and key

Her heart held in rusted chains

Life full of abuse

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For more prompts like “lock” go here: Haiku Horizons

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I also had two other closing lines for this one. Curious what you guys thought of them. Do you think either one of these would have been a better way to close this Haiku?

Waiting on her prince

Captive of abuse

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